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YOU have what it takes to hook readers from your very first line and keep them up late reading until they finish your book. Your first chapter is like a first impression--you only get one. And I'm here to help you get it right. 

My first chapter critique covers: 

  • A great first line that captivates readers

  • How to introduce your main character to the reader 

  • A starting point that offers a glimpse of the main character's life before the inciting incident

  • Worldbuilding that doesn't overwhelm the reader 

  • How to introduce the main character's GMC (goal, motivation, and conflict) 

Price: includes overall feedback and in-document comments, one pass ($.09 per word)

Work with me! 

I can't wait to work with you! 

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